A Senryu For You

29 Aug

Writer’s Island prompt: if only.  I speak from bitter experience.

If Only…

…I had checked the sauce
bottle top was fastened tight
before I shook it…

 

20 Responses to “A Senryu For You”

  1. vivinfrance August 29, 2010 at 11:15 #

    Yes, yes. Though it’s even worse with tomato ketchup!
    I’m glad you’ve lightened the tone.
    ViV

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  2. vivinfrance August 29, 2010 at 11:16 #

    PS, I like the new header!

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    • tillybud August 29, 2010 at 11:30 #

      Thanks! It was done accidentally but I like it so it stayed.

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  3. Pan/Susannah August 29, 2010 at 12:20 #

    Oooh, I have been there! 🙂

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  4. Mary August 29, 2010 at 12:48 #

    Adding ketchup (along with Viv), salad dressing, salt and pepper shakers to the mix!

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  5. Annette August 29, 2010 at 13:22 #

    I’m replying back over here! Thanks for your comment, but I *did* find a place locally that had the HP sauce! We had a nice little “British Shoppe” open up last year and I’ve already been in several times to get my beloved HP!

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    • tillybud September 1, 2010 at 09:50 #

      I’m so glad. The advertising line here is that ‘HP makes a bacon sandwich’ but HP makes any meal complete, I find.

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  6. Deborah August 29, 2010 at 13:25 #

    Brilliant LOL .. I love this!!!

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  7. systematicweasel August 29, 2010 at 13:27 #

    Many people have been there. Mine was Teriyaki sauce as I was cooking one day. Bottle caps aren’t the safest things anymore, LOL! Wonderful post!

    -Weasel

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  8. Diane Truswell August 29, 2010 at 15:51 #

    Ooooh, I know what HP sauce is… we’ve all made that mistake, LOL.

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  9. pamela August 29, 2010 at 16:09 #

    Tilly this made me laugh this morning!
    Thanks for that!
    Pamela

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  10. slpmartin August 29, 2010 at 16:22 #

    Implied funny.

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  11. marja August 30, 2010 at 02:17 #

    lol great take on the prompt

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  12. Stan Ski August 30, 2010 at 02:39 #

    We’ve all been there.

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  13. Alan Summers August 30, 2010 at 15:32 #

    I love ketchup, and I love haiku (and senryu)! 😉

    Alan, With Words

    p.s. we’re holding a haiku contest if anyone is interested (see link).

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  14. tillybud September 1, 2010 at 09:52 #

    It’s nice to know I’m not the only divvy on the block! If I read your comments correctly, there are an awful lot of dirty walls out there.

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  15. gospelwriter September 2, 2010 at 20:53 #

    haha (not laughing at, but with you 🙂 ) – I have been there, boy, have I been there!

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    • tillybud September 2, 2010 at 21:00 #

      I think we could start a support group 🙂

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