A Temporary Poem

18 Dec

I’ve got a busy day ahead but I wanted to post something; apologies if you have seen this before.  Today’s prompt for Writer’s Island is triumph.  I hope to write something else so this is a stopgap:

Dog Day Afternoon

Spring day; a walk in
the park: the triumph of hope
over effluence.

 

 

 

 

6 Responses to “A Temporary Poem”

  1. vivinfrance December 18, 2010 at 12:42 #

    I have, but it’s worth re-reading for the giggle.

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  2. 1sojournal December 18, 2010 at 17:48 #

    I haven’t, but still like it a lot.

    Elizabeth

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  3. gospelwriter December 18, 2010 at 23:23 #

    I haven’t seen it before – it’s lovely. Looking forward to more…

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  4. Berowne December 19, 2010 at 15:59 #

    Clever, enjoyable…

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  5. pamela December 19, 2010 at 19:37 #

    Tilly,
    I haven’t seen it before, but i like it.
    Pamela

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  6. Tilly Bud December 21, 2010 at 10:26 #

    I’m glad you all enjoyed it. I must confess, it was fun to write; I love punning.

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