On the Park

7 Nov






park   the dogs will bark big dogs slim dogs

           fat dogs lap dogs dogs you want to pat dogs

                   brown dogs black dogs blonde dogs pack dogs dogs dogs

            try to chase a cat dogs chase another dog dogs

         chasing off the birds dogs  dog poo dog wee

        try to         chase               chase                where            

      chase         me on              me on              the dogs

         me              the                  the                   will

        dogs            park                park                  bark

2 Responses to “On the Park”


  1. There’s No Pleasing Some People « The Laughing Housewife - February 19, 2010

    […] I entered a writing competition last year, run by Stockport Art Gallery.  There were no prizes as such, but the winning entries had their work converted into a piece of conceptual art by the artist Nicola Dale.  This is her version of one of my poems, which you can read here.  […]


  2. The Ideas Of March « The Laughing Housewife - March 18, 2010

    […] I am busy with writing events; as well as those I have told you about, I am going to workshop On The Park  with Year Six children at the school where I help out.  After their SATs, of course, so I have […]


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